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Update xfce4-battery-monitor screenshots
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RESOLVED: FIXED
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docs.xfce.org
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General

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Description Kevin Bowen editbugs 2019-12-09 08:22:35 CET
The screenshots for xfce4-battery-monitor-plugin are out of date and need to be updated.

The plugin properties window now has three tabs which need to be captured in the documentation. Additionally, some descriptions should be added, where appropriate, to describe some of the plugin's options. (e.g. some detail added for low battery action - running commands...)

https://docs.xfce.org/panel-plugins/xfce4-battery-plugin
Comment 1 Kevin Bowen editbugs 2019-12-09 08:32:02 CET
See https://docs.xfce.org/contribute/documentation for details on screenshot requirements.
Comment 2 ema-pe 2019-12-13 13:51:48 CET
Hi, I've uploaded new screenshots and added a basic description for each tab. Please review the changes and, if they're good, close this issue :)
Comment 3 Kevin Bowen editbugs 2019-12-13 23:28:41 CET
Thanks for the update. Looks good. Corrected some typos and grammar. Avoid writing descriptions as imperatives. As in "You must." or "You should" Provide a functional description of an action, don't talk to the user. Explain the functionality in neutral terms.

Bug #16260

Reported by:
Kevin Bowen
Reported on: 2019-12-09
Last modified on: 2019-12-13

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Kevin Bowen
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